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THE NEURAL LYRE: POETIC METER, THE BRAIN, AND TIME
Copyright © by Frederick Turner
& Ernst Pöppel,
10/17/01
[reprinted
from Poetry magazine]
Japanese
Epic meter (a seven-syllable line followed by a five-syllable one) (average) 3.25 secs.
Waka (average) 2.75 secs.
Tanka (recited much faster than the epic, as 3 LINES of 5, 12, and 14 syllables) (average) 2.70 secs.
Chinese
Four-syllable line 2.20 secs.
Five-syllable line 3.00 secs.
Seven-syllable line 3.80 secs.
English
Pentameter 3.30 secs.
Seven-syllable trochaic line 2.50 secs.
Stanzas using different line lengths 3.00 secs., 3.10 secs.
Ballad meter (octosyllabic) 2.40 secs.
Ancient Greek
Dactylic hexameter (half-line) 2.80 secs.
Trochaic tetrameter (half-line) 2.90 secs.
Iambic trimeter 13 4.40 secs.
Marching anapests 3.50 secs.
Anapestic tetrameter (half-line) 2.50 secs.
Latin
Alcaic strophe 3.90 secs.
Elegiac couplet 3.50 secs.
Dactylic hexameter (half-line) 2.80 secs.
Hendecasyllabic 3.80 secs.
French
Alexandrine (12-syllable) 3.80 secs.
Decasyllable with octosyllable (La Fontaine) 3.00 secs.
German
(Sample of 200 poems, collected by Pöppel)
LINE-length of under 2 seconds 03%
LINE-length of 2-3 seconds 73%
LINE-length of 3-4 seconds 07%
LINE-length between 4 and 5 seconds 17%
This fundamental unit is nearly always a rhythmic, semantic, and
syntactical unit, as well: a sentence, a colon, a clause, or a phrase; or a
completed group of them. Thus other linguistic rhythms are entrained to the
basic acoustic rhythm, producing that pleasing sensation of "fit" and
inevitability which is part of the delight of verse, and is so helpful to the
memory. Generally a short line is used to deal with light subjects, while the
long line is reserved for epic or tragic matters.
It is, we believe, highly significant that this
analysis of the fundamental LINE in human verse gives little or no significance
to breath, or "breath-units," as a determinant of the divisions of
human meter. Thus our commonsense observation that breath in speech is largely
under voluntary control, and that one could speak anything from one syllable to
about forty in one breath, is vindicated. Systems of verse based on
breath-units, such as "projective verse" and many other free-verse
systems, therefore have no objective validity or physiological foundation.15
The second universal characteristic of human verse meter is that certain
marked elements of the LINE or of groups of LINES remain constant throughout the
poem, and thus serve as indicators of the repetition of a pattern. The 3-second
cycle is not merely marked by a pause, but by distinct resemblances between the
material in each cycle. Repetition is added to frequency to emphasize the
rhythm.
These constant elements can take many forms. Simplest of all is a
constant number of syllables per line, as in Hungarian folk poetry; but here the
strict grammatical integrity of each line is insisted upon, as if to compensate
for the absence of other markers. Some verse forms (for instance, that of the Poema
de Mio Cid) have a fixed number of stressed syllables per line, with an
unfixed number of unstressed syllables. Other meters (most European ones, for
example) use small patterns of syllables, distinguished by stress or length, to
make feet, creating a line out of a fixed number of feet. Tonal languages, like
Chinese, distinguish between syllables of an unchanging tone and syllables which
change tone, and construct meters out of repeated patterns of changing and
unchanging syllables. Celtic poetry uses prescribed cadences; Old English uses
systematic alliteration. Many languages use some system of assonance, especially
rhyme, which usually marks very strongly the ending of a line, and thus forms a
strong contrast-spike to divide off one line from the next. Hebrew poetry uses
semantic and syntactical parallels between its pairs of half-lines. Often many
of these devices will be used at once, some prescribed by the conventions of the
poetic form, others left to the discretion and inspiration of the poet. No
verse-convention prescribes all the characteristics of a line, so every poem
contains an interplay between prescribed elements and free variation.16
Sometimes, as in the Spenserian stanza, or in the Greek or English ode,
or in the invented stanzas of Donne or Yeats, a whole group of lines of
different lengths will itself constitute a repeated element. When lines of
different lengths are used together, as in Milton's Lycidas, the rhyme (which stresses the integrity of the line) and
the foot are given especial emphasis to compensate for the variation in the
fundamental pulse-as if to insist on the threshold dividing the carrier-wave
from mere "noise." And in variable-lined verses there is usually a
normal-length line which acts as an unconscious constant against which the
exceptions are measured as such.
At this point, it should be indicated that some of the characteristics of
metered poetry do not apply to songs and lyrics derived from a song tradition.
Music has its own form of organization. Which diminishes the importance of the
line at the expense of the musical phrase. But in those traditions where we can
see poetry emerging from song, such as the Latin lyric, there is an interesting
tendency, as the musical order is forgotten, toward the establishment of the
characteristically poetic forms of organization: the regular line, with
variations, the distinction between different types of syllable (long and short,
stressed and unstressed, totally changing or unchanging), and the rest. Thus the
fact that songs do not conform to the limits of poetic meter is negative proof
of the relation of language and meter.
The third universal characteristic of human metrical verse is variation,
or, more precisely, a pseudolinguistic generativeness created by the imposition
of rules, which makes possible significant perturbations of an expressive
medium. Robert Frost put it very well, in a negative way, when he described
poetry without meter as being like tennis without a net: the net introduces a
restriction which is paradoxically fertile in the elaboration of groundstrokes
which it demands, and significant in that it distinguishes legal from illegal
shots.
Variation does not necessarily mean departure from the rules (Romantic
and Modernist theories of art sometimes make this mistake). Variation does not
occur despite the rules but because of them. Freedom
never means a freedom from rules, but the freedom of rules. It is important here
for us to distinguish our general position from that of sociobiological and
other purists of the genetic-deterministic persuasion on one hand, and from the
pure cultural relativists, behaviorists or otherwise, on the other. Genetic
determinists would be likely to assume, once a human universal such as metrical
verse is pointed out to them, that this behavior indicates the presence of a set
of biological constraints which act as an outer envelope, restricting possible
human behaviors within a given repertoire, large or small. Cultural relativists
would tend to deny the existence of such a human universal, or would be inclined
to dismiss it as an analogous response to similar problems or stimuli, or as an
artificial product of the investigator's definitional vocabulary and research
method.
We would adopt a third position, which is already
hinted by our use of the word "pseudolinguistic." For us, the
similarities between metered verse in different cultures are real and do indeed
indicate a shared biological underpinning; but unlike the genetic determinists
we do not regard this shared inheritance as a constraint, nor as an outer
envelope restricting human behavior to a certain range. Rather, we would regard
it as a set of rules which, though derived from the structure of the human
auditory cortex and the brain in general, does not restrict, but enormously
increases, the range of possible human behavior.
At first glance, this position might appear
paradoxical. How can the range of possibilities be increased by the imposition
of rules governing their use? If rules are rules, then they must surely deny
certain previously possible behaviors, and therefore decrease the total number
of them.
The paradox is easily resolved. A mathematical analogy will help. Given
four possible behaviors, A, B, C, and D, only four alternatives exist. If we now
impose a rule, which is that these behaviors can only be performed two at a
time, suddenly and strangely there are now not four but six alternatives: AB,
BC, CD, AC, BD, AD. Of course, this is cheating, in a sense, because before we
mentioned the rule we never hinted that behaviors might come in groups. It could
be pointed out that if we are talking about sets of behaviors, in fact sixteen
possibilities exist: the ten already mentioned, the four groups of three, the
whole group together, and the null set. But this is precisely what the rule has
done: it has created the group of behaviors as a significant entity, as a
behavior in itself, and therefore expanded the repertoire from four to six.
Furthermore, those six permitted combinations now stand in relation to ten
non-permitted ones, and their correctness marks them out as valuable and
special, as opposed to the "incorrect" permutations. Thus the rule has
introduced a) a greater repertoire of behaviors than was previously possible and
b) a marker of significance and value. All game-rules work in this way, creating
possible scenarios and desired goals out of thin air.
The linguistic rules of phonology, grammar, and the lexicon work in a
generally similar way. Linguistic rules are, to an extent, arbitrary and
culture-bound: but Chomsky has shown certain invariant characteristics in the
way in which human languages use syntactical subordination, which are no doubt
biological in origin (and probably related to the hierarchical nature of human
brain processes). Meter, with its cultural variations in the syllabic markers
but its invariance in LINE-length, shows a similar interplay of cultural and
genetic forces, and, more important, it produces a similar increase in the
repertoire of behavior and a similar capacity to create significance.
In fact it is this general strategy by which the DNA molecule of life and
the nervous systems of the higher animals attained greater complexities than the
physical universe out of which they evolved: by making permutations of elements
significant through highly restrictive "rules," and therefore
increasing, as it were, the "cardinality" of the number of bits of
information that the organism could hold. We find, for example, a similar
interplay between genetic and cultural factors in the human recognition of
colors: a rather restricted set of anatomically-determined color sensitivities
is combined by culture into a large, and often idiosyncratic, repertoire of
tints and shades, many of them with strong ideological significance. The range,
variety, and combinations of colored pigmentation used in animal ritual behavior
attests to a corresponding extension and valorization of color distinctions
among the higher animals.
Thus metrical variation can be seen as a code, or communicative device,
and the various elements of meter can be neatly described in terms of
information theory. The three-second LINE is the communicative medium or
"carrier-wave," which must be distinguishable from mere
"noise" or the random transmissions around it, by the recurrence of a
pause at the LINE-ending, by the many regular metrical features-syllable-count,
stress, quantity, tone, systematic assonance, etc.-that we have described, and
by the coincidence of semantic, syntactic, and rhythmic units with the LINE
unit. Metrical variation is the "message" which is transmitted upon
the communicative medium-like a radio-transmission, it consists of a systematic
distortion of a regular medium or wave, which nevertheless remains within the
regular parameters of the medium so that at all times the transmission is
distinguishable from random noise.
The "message" that metrical variation conveys, however, is
rather mysterious. If it is a code, what kind of code is it? Metrical scholars
have attempted to discover exact relationships between individual metrical
variations and the semantic content of poetry.17 But their
conclusions have been disappointingly vague or arbitrary, reminiscent, in fact,
of musicological attempts to assign fixed meanings to different musical keys,
signatures, and variations, so as to make a symphony describe a scene or conduct
an argument. Here the analogy between metrical and linguistic significance
breaks down. certainly a connection between metrical (or musical) and linguistic
meaning exists, and in some cultural traditions (English Augustan poetry and
European Romantic music, for instance) artists have developed a self-conscious
repertoire of metrical or musical codes to convey specific meanings. But other
traditions do not possess such codifications, or else use the same specific
devices to convey entirely different ideas.
The predicament of the critic, in fact, can be likened to that of a
viewer of a visual artifact who is so convinced that what he is looking at is a
page of writing that he does not realize that the artifact is actually a
picture. Perhaps it is a picture of something he had never seen (or never
noticed), and thus his mistake is a natural one. But the attempt to extract a
sort of linguistic meaning out of the planes, lines, corners, masses, and angles
of a picture would be frustratingly arbitrary-especially if he had a whole
series of paintings of different subjects, in which the same visual elements
were used for entirely different purposes; the same curve for a face, a
hillside, and the sail of a ship. Linguistic meaning and pictorial meaning are
based on codes so fundamentally different that no code-cracking algorithm that
would work on one could possibly work on the other. Their mutual intelligibility
cannot be sought in the direction of analysis, but only within the context of a
synthetic whole which contains both of them.
What we are suggesting is that a linguistic type of analysis of meter, as
of music (or painting, e.g., Chinese landscape painting), is likely to be
fruitful only when the composer has arbitrarily imposed linguistic meaning on
the elements of his composition; and that the meaning of metrical variation must
be sought in a fashion much more like that of the recognition of a tune or the
subject of a picture.
That is, metrical variations are not significant in
themselves, like sememes: but rather they form, together, a picture-like Gestalt
which is a distinct representation of something that we can recognize; and thus,
like pictorial representations, or music, they are much less culture-bound than
linguistic codes. But here, excitingly, we encounter a paradox stemming from the
gross structure of the human brain. Poetry, being an art of language, is
presumably processed by the left temporal lobe of the brain. But meter, we are
suggesting, carries meaning in a fashion much more like that of a picture of a
melody, in which the meaning inheres more in the whole than in the parts. There
is no "lexicon" of metrical forms: they are not signs but elements of
an analogical structure. And this kind of understanding is known to take place
on the right side of the brain. If this hypothesis is accurate, meter is, in
part, a way of introducing right-brain processes into the left-brain activity of
understanding language; and in another sense, it is a way of connecting our much
more culture-bound (and perhaps evolutionarily later) linguistic capacities with
the relatively more "hardwired" spatial pattern-recognition faculties
we share with the higher mammals.
It is in the context of this hypothesis that we wish to introduce the
major finding of this essay, which explains, we believe, the extra-ordinary
prevalence of the 3-second LINE in human poetry.
If we ask the question "what does the ear hear?" the obvious
answer is "sound." What is sound? Mechanical waves in the air or other
medium. But this answer is not very illuminating. We can, for instance, perceive
mechanical waves by the sense of touch: it would be as inaccurate to say that a
deaf man "heard" a vibrating handrail with his fingers, as it would be
to say a blind man "saw" a fire with the skin of his face. What
characterizes hearing as such is not that it senses mechanical waves but that it
senses the distinctions between mechanical waves; just as what characterizes
sight is not the perception of electromagnetic waves but the perception of
distinctions between electromagnetic waves.
For the sense of sight those distinctions (except for color) are spatial
ones; but for the sense of hearing they are mainly temporal. To put it directly:
what the sense of hearing hears is essentially time. The recognition of
differences of pitch involves a very pure (and highly accurate) comparative
measurement of different frequencies into which time is divided. The perception
of timbre, tone, sound texture, and so on consists in the recognition of
combinations of frequencies: and the sense of rhythm and tempo carries the
recognition of frequency into the realm of longer periods of time.
The sense of hearing is not only a marvelously accurate instrument for
detecting differences between temporal periods; it is also an active organizer,
arranging those different periods within a hierarchy as definite as that of the
seconds, minutes, and hours of a clock, but one in which the different
periodicities are also uniquely valorized. In the realm of pitch the structure
of that hierarchy is embodied in the laws of harmony, and is well known (though
it has not often been recognized that "sound" and "time" are
virtually the same thing). New discoveries by Ernst Pöppel's group in Munich
have begun to open up the role of the auditory time-hierarchy in the structure
and function of the brain. Out of this investigation is coming a comprehensive
understanding of the general scheduling-organization of the human sensory-motor
system, and a fresh approach to the production and understanding of language. We
shall first briefly outline the auditory hierarchy.
Events separated by periods of time shorter than about three thousandths
of a second are classified by the hearing system as simultaneous. If a brief
sound of one pitch is played to one ear, and another of a different pitch is
played to the other less than .003 sec. later, the subject will experience only
one sound. If the sounds are a little more than .003 sec. apart, the subject
will experience two sounds. However, he will not be able to tell which of the
two sounds came first, nor will he until the gap between them is increased ten
times. Thus the lowest category in the hierarchy of auditory time is
simultaneity, and the second lowest is mere temporal separation, without a
preferred order of time. The most primary temporal experience is timeless unity;
next comes a spacelike recognition of difference-spacelike because, unlike
temporal positions, spatial positions can be exchanged. One can go from New York
to Berlin or from Berlin to New York; but one can only go from 1980 to 1983, not
from 1983 to 1980. Likewise, the realm of "separation" is a
non-deterministic, acausal one: events happen in it, perhaps in patterns or
perhaps not, but they cannot be said to cause one another, because we cannot say
which came first.
When two sounds are about three hundredths of a second apart, a subject
can experience their sequence, accurately reporting which came first. This is
the third category in the hierarchy of auditory time, subsuming separations and
simultaneities and organizing them rationally with respect to each other. But at
this stage the organism is still a passive recipient of stimuli; we can hear a
sequence of two sounds one-tenth of a second apart, but there is nothing we can
do in response to the first sound before the second sound comes along: we are
helpless to alter what will befall us, if the interval between the alert and its
sequel falls within this range. Unlike the world of temporal separation, which
is in a sense a realm of chance and pattern, the world of sequence is a realm of
fate and cause. Events follow each other, and their temporal connections can be
recognized as necessary, if indeed they are; but there is nothing we can do
about it.
Once the temporal interval is above about three-tenths of a second,
however, we have entered a new temporal category, which we might call response.
For three-tenths of a second (.3 sec.) is enough time for a human subject to
react to an acoustic stimulus. If we play two sounds to our subject a second
apart, the subject could in theory prepare to deal with the second sound in the
time given him after hearing the first. The perceiver is no longer passive, and
events can be treated by him as actions in response to which he can perform
actions of his own and which he can modify before they happen if he understands
their cause. For response to exist there must be simultaneities, a separation,
and a further element which might be characterized as function or, in a
primitive sense, purpose. The response to a given stimulus will differ according
to the function of the responding organ and the purpose of the organism as a
whole.
At several places in this analysis it has been pointed out that a given
familiar temporal relation-chance, pattern, fate, cause, action, function,
purpose-only becomes possible when there is enough time for it to exist in. The
idea that an entity needs time to exist in has become commonplace recently: an
electron, for instance, requires at least 10-20 seconds of time (its spin
period) to exist in, just as surely as it requires 10-10 centimeters of space
(its Compton wavelength). The corollary to this observation is that entities
which consist only in spatio-temporal relations are not necessarily less real
for that than material objects, for spatio-temporal relations are exactly what
material objects consist of too. But though a given period of time may be
sufficient for an example of given relation-chance, cause, function-to be
recognized in, it is not enough for the concept of the relation to be formulated
in. It takes much less time to recognize or speak a word once learned than it
takes to learn the word in the first place. Many examples of the sequence or
response relation between events must be compared before a causal or purposive
order can be formulated and thus recognized in individual cases. But comparisons
requires discrete parcels of experience between which the comparison may be
made, and since the entities being compared are themselves temporal in nature,
these parcels of experience must consist in equal periods of time. In like
fashion, the analysis of a picture (for transmission, reproduction, or
identification of its details) might begin by dividing the picture up into
"pixels" by means of a series of grids of various frequency; the
highest-frequency grid representing the limit of the eye's activity, the lower
ones increasingly concerned with complex relations between details. The next
lowest time-division beyond the .3 second response-frequency must be
sufficiently long to avoid falling into the range of the characteristic
time-quanta required for the completion and recognition of the temporal
relations to be compared. The comparison of experience takes more time than
experience itself; the recognition of a melody takes more time than the hearing
of the single notes.
This fundamental "parcel of experience" turns out to be about
three seconds. The three-second period, roughly speaking, is the length of the
human present moment. (At least it is for the auditory system, which possesses
the sharpest temporal acuity of all the senses. The eye, for instance, is twice
as slow as the ear in distinguishing temporal separation from simultaneity.) The
philosophical notion of the "specious present" finds here its
experimental embodiment.
A human speaker will pause for a few milliseconds every three seconds or
so, and in that period decide on the precise syntax and lexicon of the next
three seconds. A listener will absorb about three seconds of heard speech
without pause or reflection, then stop listening briefly in order to integrate
and make sense of what he has heard. (Speaker and hearer, however, are not
necessarily "in phase" for this activity; this observation will be
seen to be of importance later.)
To use a cybernetic metaphor, we possess an auditory information
"buffer" whose capacity is three seconds' worth of information; at the
end of three seconds the "buffer" is full, and it passes on its entire
accumulated stock of information to the higher processing centers. In theory
this stock could consist of about 1,000 simultaneities, 100 discrete temporal
separations, and ten consecutive responses to stimuli. In practice the
"buffer" has rather smaller capacity than this (about 60 separations);
it seems to need a certain amount of "down-time."
It appears likely that another mechanism is involved here, too. Different
types of information take different amounts of time to be processed by the
cortex. For instance, fine detail in the visual field takes more time to be
identified by the cortex than coarse detail. (Indeed, the time taken to process
detail seems to be used by the brain as a tag to label its visual frequency.)18
Some sort of pulse is necessary so that all the information of different kinds
will arrive at the higher processing centers as a bundle, correctly labeled as
belonging together, and at the same time; the sensory cortex "waits"
for the "slowest" information to catch up with the "fastest"
so that it can all be sent off at once. And this 3-second period constitutes a
"pulse."
Beyond the two horizons of this present moment exist the two periods
which together constitute duration, which is the highest or
"longest-frequency" integrative level of the human perception of time.
Those two periods, the past and the future, memory and planning, are the widest
arena of human thought (unless the religious or metaphysical category of
"eternity" constitutes an even wider one). It is within the realm of
duration, that what we call freedom can exist, for it is within that realm that
purposes and functions, the governors of response, can themselves be compared
and selected. The differences between past and future, and the differences
between possible futures, constitute the field of value, and the relations
between low-frequency objects and the more primitive high-frequency objects of
which they are composed constitute the field of quality.
It is tempting to relate this foregoing hierarchical taxonomy of temporal
periodicities to the structure and evolution of the physical universe itself.
The temporal category of simultaneity nicely corresponds to the atemporal Umwelt
of the photon, which reigned supreme in the first microsecond of the Big Bang.
The category of separation resembles the weak, acausal, stochastic, spacelike
temporality of quantum physics, within which there is no preferred direction of
time: a condition which must have prevailed shortly after the origin of the
universe, and of which the quantum-mechanical organization of subatomic
particles is a living fossil. The category of sequence matches the causal,
deterministic, and entropic realm of classical hard science, whose subject came
into being some time after the origin of the universe, once the primal explosion
had cooled sufficiently to permit the existence if organized, discrete, and
enduring matter. With the category of response we are clearly within the Umwelt
of living matter, with its functions, purposes, and even its primitive and
temporary teleology, which began about ten billion years after the Big Bang.
Once we cross the horizon of the present we leave the world of animals and enter
the realm of duration, which first came into being perhaps a million years ago
(if it was roughly coeval with speech and with that development of the left
brain which gave us the tenses of language). The evolution and hierarchical
structure of the human hearing mechanism thus could be said to recapitulate the
history and organization of the cosmos. The history of science has been the
retracing of that path backwards by means of clocks of greater and greater
acuity.
Cosmological speculation aside, it should already be obvious that a
remarkable and suggestive correlation exists between the temporal organization
of poetic meter and the temporal function of the human hearing mechanism. Of
general linguistic significance is the fact that the length of a syllable-about
1/3 second-corresponds to the minimum period within which a response to an
auditory stimulus can take place: this is commonsense, really, as speech must,
to be efficient, be as fast as it can be, while, to be controllable, it must be
slow enough for a speaker or hearer to react to a syllable before the next one
comes along.
Of more specific significance for our subject is the very exact
correlation between the three-second LINE and the three-second "auditory
present." The average number of syllables per LINE in human poetry seems to
be about ten; so human poetic meter embodies the two lowest-frequency rhythms in
the human auditory system.
The independence of poetic meter from the mechanism of breathing, which
we have already noted, is thus explained by the fact that the master-rhythm of
human meter is not pulmonary but neural: we must seek the origins of poetry not
among the lower regions of the human organism, but among the higher. The
frequent practice in reading "free verse" aloud, of breathing at the
end of the line-even when the line is highly variable in length and often broken
quite without regard to syntax-is therefore not only grammatically confusing but
deeply unnatural: for it forces a pause where neural processing would not
normally put it.
But at least there was a clear, if erroneous, rationale for the doctrine
of meter as made up of "breath-units." Without this rationale, how do
we explain the cultural universality of meter? Why does verse embody the
three-second neural "present"? What functions could be served by this
artificial and external mimicry of an endogenous brain rhythm? Given the fact,
already stated, that poetry fulfills many of the superficial conditions demanded
of a brain-efficiency reward control system, how might the three-second rhythm
serve that function? And what is the role of the other components of meter-the
rhythmic parallelism between the LINES, and the information-bearing variations
upon that parallelism?
One further batch of data will help guide our hypothesizing: the
subjective reports of poets and readers of poetry about the effects and powers
of poetic meter. Although these reports would be inadequate and ambiguous as the
sole support of an argument, they may point us in the right direction and
confirm conclusions arrived at by other means.
A brief and incomplete summary of these reports, with a few citations,
should suggest to a reader educated in literature the scope of their general
agreement. Robert Graves speaks of the shiver and the coldness in the spine, the
hair rising on the head and body, as does Emily Dickinson. A profound muscular
relaxation yet an intense alertness and concentration is also recorded. The
heart feels squeezed and the stomach cramped. There is a tendency toward
laughter or tears, or both; the taking of deep breaths; and a slightly
intoxicated feeling (Samuel Taylor Coleridge compared it to the effects of a
moderate amount of strong spirits upon a conversation). At the same time there
is a cataract or avalanche of vigorous thought, in which new connections are
made; Shakespeare's Prospero describes the sensation as a "beating
mind" (the phrase is repeated three times in different places in the play).
There is a sense of being on the edge of a precipice of insight-almost a
vertigo-and the awareness of entirely new combinations of ideas taking concrete
shape, together with feelings of strangeness and even terror. Some writers
(Arnold, for instance) speak of an inner light or flame. Outside stimuli are
often blanked out, so strong is the concentration. The imagery of the poem
becomes so intense that it is almost like real sensory experience. Personal
memories pleasant and unpleasant (and sometimes previously inaccessible) are
strongly evoked; there is often an emotional re-experience of close personal
ties, with family, friends, lovers, the dead. There is an intense valorization
of the world and of human life, together with a strong sense of the
reconciliation of opposites-joy and sorrow, life and death, good and evil,
divine and human, reality and illusion, whole and part, comic and tragic, time
and timelessness. The sensation is not a timeless one as such, but an experience
of time so full of significance that stillness and sweeping motion are the same
thing. There is a sense of power combined with effortlessness. The poet or
reader rises above the world, as it were, on the "viewless wings of
poetry," and sees it all in its fullness and completeness, but without loss
of the quiddity and clarity of its details. There is an awareness of one's own
physical nature, of one's birth and death, and of a curious transcendence of
them; and, often, a strong feeling of universal and particular love, and
communal solidarity.
Of course, not all these subjective sensations necessarily occur together
in the experience of poetry, nor do they usually take their most intense form;
but a poet or frequent reader of poetry will probably recognize most of them.
To this list, moreover, should be added a further property of metered
poetry, which goes beyond the immediate experience of it: that is, its
memorability. Part of this property is undoubtedly a merely technical
convenience: the knowledge of the number of syllables in a line and the rhyme,
for instance, limits the number of words and phrases which are possible in a
forgotten line and helps us to logically reconstruct it. But introspection will
reveal a deeper quality to this memorability: somehow the rhythm of the words is
remembered even when the words themselves are lost to us; but the rhythm helps
us to recover the mental state in which we first heard or read the poem, and
then the gates of memory are opened and the words come to us at once.
Equipped with the general contemporary conception of brain-processing
with which this essay began, with the temporal analysis of meter and its
correlation to the hearing-system, and with the subjective reports of
participants in the art, we may now begin to construct a plausible hypothesis of
what goes on in the brain during the experience of poetry.
Here we can draw upon a relatively new and speculative field of
scientific inquiry, which has been variously termed "neurophysiology,"
"biocybernetics," and "biopsychology," and is associated
with the names of such researchers as E. Bourguignon, E. D. Chapple, E. Gellhorn,
A. Neher, and R. Ornstein. Barbara Lex's essay "The Neurobiology of Ritual
Trance,"19 in which she summarizes and synthesizes much of their
work, provides many of the materials by which we may build an explanatory bridge
between the observed characteristics of human verse and the new findings of the
Munich group about the hearing mechanism. Although Lex is concerned with the
whole spectrum of methods by which altered states of consciousness may be
attained-alcohol, hypnotic suggestion, breathing techniques, smoking music,
dancing, drugs, fasting, meditation, sensory deprivation, photic driving, and
auditory driving-and her focus is on ritual rather than the art of poetry, her
general argument fits in well with our own findings.
Essentially her position is that the various techniques listed above, and
generalized as "driving behaviors," are designed to add the linear,
analytic, and verbal resources of the left brain the more intuitive and holistic
understanding of the right brain; to tune the central nervous system and
alleviate accumulated stress; and to invoke to the aid of social solidarity and
cultural values the powerful somatic and emotional forces mediated by the
sympathetic and parasympathetic nervous systems, and the ergotropic and
trophotropic responses they control.20
It has been known for many years that rhythmic photic and auditory
stimulation can evoke epileptic symptoms in seizure-prone individuals, and can
produce powerful involuntary reactions even in normal persons. The rhythmic
stimulus entrains and then amplifies natural brain rhythms, especially if it is
tuned to an important frequency such as the ten cycle-per-second alpha wave. It
seems plausible to us that the three-second poetic LINE is similarly tuned to
the three-second cycle of the auditory (and subjective-temporal) present. The
metrical and assonantal devices of verse such as rhyme and stress, which create
similarities between the LINES, emphasize the repetition. The curious subjective
effects of metered verse-relaxation, a holistic sense of the world and so on-are
no doubt attributable to a very mild pseudotrance state induced by the auditory
driving effect of this repetition.
Auditory driving is known to affect the right brain much more powerfully
than the left: thus, where ordinary unmetered prose comes to us in a
"mono" mode, so to speak, affecting the left brain predominantly,
metered language comes to us in a "stereo" mode, simultaneously
calling on the verbal resources of the left and the rhythmic potentials of the
right.21
Of course, the matter is not as simple as this, even at this level of
discussion. The accurate scansion of poetry involves a complex analysis of
grammatical and lexical stress, which must be continually integrated with a
non-verbal right-brain understanding of metrical stress. The delightful way in
which the rhythm of the sentence, as a semantic unit, counterpoints the rhythm
of the meter in poetry, is thus explained as the result of a co-operation
between left and right brain functions. The "stereo" effect of verse
is not merely one of simultaneous stimulation of two different brain areas, but
also the result of a necessary integrative collaboration and feedback between
them. The linguistic capacities of the left brain, which, as Levy says, provide
a temporal order for spatial information, are forced into a conversation with
the rhythmic and musical capacities of the right, which provide a spatial order
for temporal information.
But the driving rhythm of the three-second LINE is not just any rhythm.
It is, as we have seen, tuned to the largest limited unit of auditory time, its
specious present, within which causal sequences can be compared, and free
decisions taken. A complete poem-which can be any length-is a duration, a realm
of values, systematically divided into presents, which are the realm of action.
It therefore summarizes our most sophisticated and most uniquely human
integrations of time.
There is,
perhaps, still another effect at work on the cortical level. The various
divinatory practices of humankind (another cultural universal, perhaps) all
involve a common element: a process of very complex calculation which seems
quite irrelevant to the kind of information sought by the diviner. A reader of
the Tarot will analyze elaborate combinations of cards, an I Ching reader will
arrive at his hexagram through a difficult process of mathematical figuring, a
reader of the horoscope will resort to remarkable computations of astronomical
position and time. (The common use of the word "reader" in these
contexts is suggestive.) The work of scanning metered verse, especially when
combined with the activity of recognizing allusions and symbolisms, and the
combination of them into the correct patterns, seems analogous to these
divinatory practices. The function of this demanding process of calculation may
be to occupy the linear and rational faculties of the brain with a task which
entirely distracts them from the matter to be decided-a diagnosis, a marriage,
the future of an individual. Once the "loud voice" of the reductive
logical intelligence is thus stilled by distance, the quieter whispering of a
holistic intuition, which can integrate much larger quantities of much
poorer-quality information in more multifarious ways-though with a probability
of accuracy which is correspondingly much lower-can then be heard. The technique
is something like that of the experienced stargazer, who can sometimes make out
a very faint star by focusing a little to one side of it, thereby bringing to
bear on it an area of the retina which, though inferior in acuity, is more
sensitive to light. The vatic, prophetic, or divinatory powers traditionally
attributes to poetry may be partly explained by the use of this technique. If
the analogy is slightly unflattering to the work of some professional analytic
critics of poetry-reducing their work, as it does, to the status of an elaborate
decoy for the more literalistic proclivities of the brain-there is the
compensation that it is after all a very necessary activity, indeed
indispensable precisely because of its irrelevance.
On the cortical level, then, poetic meter serves a number of functions
generally aimed at tuning up and enhancing the performance of the brain, by
bringing to bear other faculties than the linguistic, which we can relate to the
summary of healthy brain characteristics at the beginning of this paper. By
ruling out certain rhythmic possibilities, meter satisfies the brain's
procrustean demand for unambiguity and clear distinctions. By combining elements
of repetition and isochrony on one hand with variation on the other, it nicely
fulfills the brain's habituative need for controlled novelty. By giving the
brain a system of rhythmic organization as well as a circumscribed set of
semantic and syntactical possibilities, it encourages the brain in its synthetic
and predictive activity of hypothesis-construction, and raises expectations
which are pleasingly satisfied at once. In its content, poetry has often had a
strongly prophetic character, an obvious indication of its predictive function;
and the mythic elements of poetry afford more subtle models of the future by
providing guides to conduct. Poetry presents to the brain a system which is
temporally and rhythmically hierarchical, as well as linguistically so, and
therefore matched to the hierarchical organization of the brain itself. It does
much of the work that the brain must usually do for itself, in organizing
information into rhythmic pulses, integrating different types of
information-rhythmic, grammatical, lexical, acoustic-into easily assimilable
parcels and labeling their contents as belonging together. Like intravenous
nourishment, the information enters our system instantly, without a lengthy
process of digestion. The pleasure of metered verse evidently comes from its
ability to stimulate the brain's capacities of self-reward, and the traditional
concern of verse with the deepest human values-truth, goodness, and beauty-is
clearly associated with its involvement with the brain's own motivational
system. Poetry seems to be a device the brain can use in reflexively calibrating
itself, turning its software into hardware and its hardware into software: and
accordingly poetry is traditionally concerned, on its semantic level, with
consciousness and conscience. As a quintessentially cultural activity, poetry
has been central to social learning and the synchronization of social activities
(the sea-shanty or work-song is only the crudest and most obvious example).
Poetry, as we have seen, enforces cooperation between left-brain temporal
organization and right-brain spatial organization and helps to bring about that
integrated stereoscopic view that we call true understanding. And poetry is, par
excellence, "kalogenetic"-productive of beauty, of elegant, coherent,
and predictively powerful models of the world.
It might be argued-and this is a traditional charge against poetry-that
in doing all these things poetry deceives us, presenting to us an experience
which, because it is so perfectly designed for the human brain, gives us a false
impression of reality and separates us from the rough world in which we must
survive. Much modern esthetic theory is in fact devoted to reversing this
situation, and making poetry-and art in general-so disharmonious with our
natural proclivities that it shocks us into awareness of the stark realities.
Clearly a poetry which was too merely harmonious would be insipid-for it would
disappoint the brain's habituative desire for novelty. But mere random change
and the continuous disappointment of expectations is itself insipid; we are as
capable of becoming habituated to meaningless flux as to mindless regularity.
Modernist esthetic theory may be ignoring the following possibility: that
our species' special adaptation may in fact be to expect more order and meaning
in the world than it can deliver; and that those expectations may constitute,
paradoxically, an excellent survival strategy. We are strongly motivated to
restore the equilibrium between reality and our expectations by altering reality
so as to validate our models of it-to "make the world a better place,"
as we put it. The modernist attack on beauty in art would therefore constitute
an attack on our very nature itself; and the modernist and post-modernist
criticism of moral and philosophical idealism likewise flies in the face of the
apparent facts about human neural organization. What William James called
"the will to believe" is written in our genes; teleology is the best
policy; and paradoxically, it is utopian to attempt to do battle against our
natural idealism. Much more sensible to adjust reality to the ideal.
But our discussion of the effects of metered verse on the human brain has
ignored, so far, the subcortical levels of brain activity. Let us substitute, as
pars pro toto, "metered verse" for "rituals" in the
following summary by Barbara Lex:
The raison d'etre of rituals is the readjustment of dysphasic biological and social rhythms by manipulation of neurophysiological structures under controlled conditions. Rituals properly executed promote a feeling of well-being and relief, not only because prolonged or intense stresses are alleviated, but also because the driving techniques employed in rituals are designed to sensitize and "tune" the nervous system and thereby lessen inhibition of the right hemisphere and permit temporary right-hemisphere dominance, as well as mixed trophotropic-ergotropic excitation, to achieve synchronization of cortical rhythms in both hemispheres and evoke trophotropic rebound.22
Lex maintains that the "driving" techniques of rhythmic dances,
chants, and so on can produce a simultaneous stimulation of both the ergotropic
(arousal) and the trophotropic (rest) systems of the lower nervous system,
producing subjective effects which she characterizes as follows: trance;
ecstasy; meditative and dreamlike states; possession; the "exhilaration
accompanying risk taking"; a sense of community; sacredness; a
"process of reviving the memory of a repressed unpleasant experience and
expressing in speech and actions the emotions related to it, thereby relieving
the personality of its influence"; alternate laughing and crying; mystical
experience and religious conversion; experiences of unity, holism, and
solidarity. Laughlin and d'Aquili add to these effects a sense of union with a
greater power, an awareness that death is not to be feared, a feeling of harmony
with the universe, and a mystical "conjunctio oppositorum" or unity of
opposites. This list closely resembles our earlier enumeration of the experience
of good metered verse as described by literary people.
If Lex is right, we can add to the more specifically cortical effects of
metered verse the more generalized functions of a major ritual driving
technique: the promotion of biophysiological stress-reduction (peace) and social
solidarity (love). Meter clearly synchronizes not only speaker with hearer, but
hearers with each other, so that each person's three-second "present"
is in phase with the others and a rhythmic community, which can become a
perfomative community, is generated.
Laughlin and d'Aquili connect
the mythical mode of narrative with the driving techniques of ritual, pointing
out that mythical thought expresses the "cognitive imperative," as
they call it, or the desire for an elegant and meaningful explanation of the
world;23 and McManus argues that such practices are essential in the
full development and education of children.24 (Again we might point
out that the modernist praise of mythical thought is misplaced; for it values
the irrational element it discerns in myth, whereas true mythical thought, as
Levi-Strauss has shown, is deeply rational and has much in common with
scientific hypothesis.)
The theory of the state-boundedness of memory might also explain the
remarkable memorability of poetry. If meter evokes a peculiar brain state, and
if each meter and each use of meter with its unique variations carries its own
mood or brain-state signature, then it is not surprising that we can recall
poetry so readily. The meter itself can evoke the brain-state in which we first
heard the poem, and therefore make the verbal details immediately accessible to
recall. Homer said that the muses were the daughters of memory, and this may be
what he meant. By contrast, the modernist critic Chatman sneeringly dismisses
the mnemonic function of metered poetry as being in common with that of
advertising jingles. But if advertising jingles are left holding the field of
human emotional persuasion, poetry has surely lost the battle-or the advertising
jingles have become the only true poetry.
To sum up the general argument of this essay: metered poetry is a
cultural universal, and its salient feature, the three-second LINE, is tuned to
the three-second present moment of the auditory information-processing system.
By means of metrical variation, the musical and pictorial powers of the right
brain are enlisted by meter to cooperate with the linguistic powers of the left;
and by auditory driving effects, the lower levels of the nervous system are
stimulated in such a way as to reinforce the cognitive functions of the poem, to
improve the memory, and to promote physiological and social harmony. Metered
poetry may play an important part in developing our more subtle understandings
of time, and may thus act as a technique to concentrate and reinforce our
uniquely human tendency to make sense of the world in terms of values like
truth, beauty, and goodness. Meter breaks the confinement of linguistic
expression and appreciation within two small regions of the left temporal lobe
and brings to bear the energies of the whole brain.25
The consequences of this new understanding of poetic meter are very
wide-ranging. This understanding would endorse the classical conception of
poetry, as designed to "instruct by delighting," as Sir Philip Sidney
put it.26 It would suggest strongly that "free verse," when
uncoupled from any kind of metrical regularity, is likely to forgo the benefits
of bringing the whole brain to bear. It would also predict that free verse would
tend to become associated with views of the world on which the tense-structure
has become very rudimentary and the more complex values, being time-dependent,
have disappeared. A bureaucratic social system, requiring specialists rather
than generalists, would tend to discourage11 reinforcement techniques such as
metered verse, because such techniques put the whole brain to use and encourage
world-views that might transcend the limited values of the bureaucratic system;
and by the same token it would encourage activities like free verse, which are
highly specialized both neurologically and culturally. Prose, both because of
its own syntactical rhythms and because of its traditional liberty of topic and
vocabulary, is less highly specialized; though it is significant that
bureaucratic prose tends toward being arrhythmic and toward specialized
vocabulary. The effect of free verse is to break down the syntactical rhythms of
prose without replacing them by meter, and the tendency of free verse has been
toward a narrow range of vocabulary, topic, and genre-mostly lyric descriptions
of private and personal impressions. Thus free verse, like existentialist
philosophy, is nicely adapted to the needs of the bureaucratic and even the
totalitarian state, because of its confinement of human concern within narrow
specialized limits where it will not be politically threatening.
The implications for education are very important. If we wish to develop
the full powers of the minds of the young, early and continuous exposure to the
best metered verse would be essential; for the higher human values, the
cognitive abilities of generalization and pattern-recognition, the positive
emotions such as love and peacefulness, and even a sophisticated sense of time
and timing, are all developed by poetry. Furthermore, our ethnocentric bias may
be partly overcome by the study of poetry in other languages, and the
recognition if the underlying universals in poetic meter. Indeed, the pernicious
custom of translating foreign metered verse originals into free verse may
already have done some harm; it involves an essentially arrogant assumption of
western modernist superiority over the general "vulgar" human love of
regular verse.
It may well be that the rise of utilitarian education for the working and
middle classes, together with a loss of traditional folk poetry, had a lot to do
with the success of political and economic tyranny in our times. The masses,
starved of the beautiful and complex rhythms of poetry, were only too
susceptible to the brutal and simplistic rhythms of the totalitarian slogan or
advertising jingle. An education in verse will tend to produce citizens capable
of using their full brains coherently, able to unite rational thought and
calculation with values and commitment.
Footnotes
1 This body of theory is
developed in J. T. Fraser, Of Time,
Passion and Knowledge (Braziller, 1975), and in J. T. Fraser et al., eds.. The
Study of Time, vols. I, II, and III (Springer-Verlag, 1972, 1975, 1978).
2 The following summary of
characteristic human information processing strategies owes much to these
sources of information: The proceedings of the Werner
Reimers Stiftung Biological Aspects of Esthetics Group. C. D. Laughlin, Jr., and E. G.
d'Aquili, Biogenetic Structuralism
(Columbia University Press, 1974). E. G. d'Aquili, C. D. Laughlin,
Jr., and J. McManus, eds., The Spectrum of
Ritual: A Biogenetic Structural Analysis (Columbia University, 1979). D. E. Berlyne and K. B. Madsen,
eds., Pleasure, Reward, Preference: Their
Nature, Determinants, and Role in Behavior (Academic Press, 1973). A.
Routtenberg, ed., Biology
of Reinforcement: Facets of Brain Stimulation Reward (Academic Press, 1980).
J. Olds, Drives and
Reinforcements: Behavioral Studies of
Hypothalamic Functions (Raven Press, 1977). C. Blakemore, Mechanics
of the Mind, Cambridge University Press, 1977.
3 E. Pöppel, "Erlebte Zeit--und
die Zeit uberhaupt," paper given at the Werner Reimers Stiftung
"Biological Aspects of Esthetics" conference, January, 1982.
4 Private communications, I.
Rentschler, 1981 and 1982.
5 "Biological Aspects of
Esthetics" meeting, January, 1982.
6 F. Turner, "Verbal
Creativity and the Meter of Love-Poetry," paper given at the
"Biological Aspects of Esthetics" meeting, September, 1980.
7 On cultural universals, see I. Eibl-Eibesfeldt, Ethology (Holt,
Rinehart, 1970).
8 J. Rothenberg, Technicians
of the Sacred (Doubleday Anchor, 1968).
9 W. K. Wimsatt, Versification:
Major Language Types, New York University Press, 1972.
10 Presented at the
"Biological Aspects of Esthetics" meeting, April, 1981.
11 For instance, in Yanomami
contract-chants and Western advertising jingles.
12 W. K. Wimsatt, Ibid.
13 This is a narrative meter,
whose actual pauses do not necessarily fall upon the line-endings. In Aeschylus'
Agamemnon, for example, an 11-line
sample contained 15 pauses, and lasted 48 seconds. Thus in practice the
LINE-length is about 3 seconds.
14 Probably reflects the
statistical effect of lines with a strong caesura.
15 Charles Olson's Projective
Verse (New York: Totem Press, 1959) is a good example of such free-verse
theories.
16 Wimsatt, Ibid.
17 There is an interesting
account of various critical theories of meter in the introductory chapter of C.
Chatman's A Theory of Meter (Mouton,
1965), but it is flawed by a bias against the possibility of biological
foundations for metrical usage.
18 Private communication, I. Rentschler, 1981.
19 D'Aquili et al., The
Spectrum of Ritual, Ch. 4. pp. 117-51
20 "Ergotropic" refers
to the whole pattern of connected behaviors and states that characterize the
aroused state of the body, including an increased heart rate and blood flow to
the skeletal muscles, wakefulness, alertness, and a hormone balance consistent
with "fight or flight" activities.
"Trophotropic" refers to the corresponding
system of rest, body maintenance, and relaxation: decreased heart rate, a flow
of blood to the internal organs, an increase in the activity of the digestive
process, drowsiness, and a hormone balance consistent with sleep, inactivity, or
trance.
21 John Frederick Nims makes
exactly this point in his Western Wind: An
Introduction to Poetry (Random House, 1983), p. 258
22 D'Aquili et al., p. 144.
23 Ibid., Ch. 5, pp. 152-82.
24 Ibid., Ch. 6, pp. 183-215.
25 Charles O. Hartman, in his Free
Verse: An Essay on Prosody (Princeton University Press, 1980), like many
free-verse theorists, argues against the isochronic theory of meter. But his
strictures apply to the lengths of syllables and feet, not to the LINE; and part
of his argument is based on the fact that much free verse does not fit any
temporal schema. This would not be a problem for our argument, which does not
consider such free verse to be poetry in the strict sense. His argument attempts
to save free verse, and therefore defines verse in a hopelessly vague way; ours
is content to abandon it as verse unless it consciously or unconsciously employs
the human and universal grammar of meter. It may be an admirable kind of word
play, and it might even be argued that it is a new art-form of our century. But
it is not poetry; and if this sounds dogmatic, it should be remembered that
dogmatism is only bad when it is wrong.
26 A Defense of Poetry.
[Dan replies: I love pieces like this for the same reason I love reading on psi phenomena or watching WWF Wrestling- it’s just fun to see the contortions minds go to in defense of something- be it UFOs or the Loch Ness Monster, or that rasslin’s the ruin of us all- sex & violence, & all that. Also they just beg for participation! I think the coin of ‘kalogenetic’ & the last 2 paragraphs reveal the aim of the piece quite well, a return to yore- a very Classical yore, to boot! If Senator Jesse Helms could understand polysyllabic words he would be shooting his load your way about now! The piece has an impressive heft [1 of the heftiest in mere essay- not book- form- that I’ve ever read] & I simply cannot argue with the minutiae of your colleague’s & your study, & even if I could it is not something that is of real interest- nor use- to artists; therefore I also care not. Dennett is a Dan that might, but not Schneider. I recall Michael Talbot’s book The Holographic Universe as the last piece to essay this way- & it was also enjoyable; don’t mistake my criticism as a lack of enjoyment- in fact I think the piece succeeds well in probing some ideas- I just think the cavern spelunked ain’t got no bones! There are powerful ideas on biology, neurology, & philosophy here- but on art? But, then, art is not the real aim of this piece, is it? Philosophy is & it begs the question of whether you are an artist or merely a philosopher/scientist who uses art as the vehicle to propagate your worldview? The difference being the primacy allotted to these endeavors, & the subsequent devotion to their crafts. Is this a de facto admission of artistic dabblery in service to your truly perceived role as social engineer? If so, your devotion to science is admirable- why not drop the art & concentrate all your efforts there? Or is science yet another masque for philosophy? Mind you- I like that you endeavor such- some day some one will probably use this data to great cause- but it probably won’t be a poet! It’s as if you’ve given us all the data on a tiger & its habits, but not told us what its stripes look like, or that this tiger is in a cage, & was declawed 3 years back. What popped to mind was Tycho Brahe’s amply detailed work- yet he still denied a heliocentric solar system in favor of his Tychonic geocentric model. Simply put- [& I hate to do the name-dropping deal but my Jeffers essay really wallops meter!] the moment 1 recognizes a 3rd stress level in speech metrical dualism is TOAST! Period. No music of the spheres. Not too relevant. See my comments on Willy’s Sonnet 18 after your essay on beauty. Why do you think that meter has always been a thing gnawing at free versers? Most have still implicitly clung to it merely to have a straw man to kick- the idea a useful foil in their eternally aborning ‘revolutions’. Formal verse is more dependent on repetons of syllabic, alliterative, assonant, & riming structures. They’ve simply lacked the balls to say- ‘Uh, fellas, y’know that thing you’ve been kicking about a few eons?’ But back to your piece! You assert that meter has not received attention from humanists? Given that the term is so encompassing & diverse I can only take this as an rhetorical obfuscative parry designed to set up your piece’s thrust! & given the thrust’s heft 1 wonders the old ‘protests too much?’ deal. Another point on meter, or the rhythms of ‘natural speech’ that William Carlos Williams [that apostate bastard, eh?] touted: ask any news reporter who has had to edit tape of an interviewee how difficult it is to listen to [& how universal meter is!], then transcribe human speech ‘au natural’- thus was invented punctuation! Which leads me in to your ideas on ‘breath’: punctuation is designed both for a moment to breathe, & the mind to hesitate- this is why Joycean ‘stream-of-consciousness’- while an interesting technique- is manifestly false in its claim to represent human thought. Why do you think he’s enjoyed by artists & scholars & Danielle Steel is a bestseller? Similarly fallacious is most musing on ‘blues’ or ‘jazz’ poetry- with it trisyllabic tercerts- again, false. Probably the only ‘Jazz’ poet who understood this was the young Quincy Troupe- who in fact composed Jazz proems which are far more musical than the Kerouackian attempts at poetry, or any of his pale copiers. We, in fact, think punctually- something alot of free versers miss! & the line has another little thing to allow breath- it’s called the break. Were this not true all poems would be proems. Fred, people are not James Earl Jones doing Othello! If we were there would be no reason at all for spoken word! Were meter so ‘real’ interpretation would have no meaning or purpose; yet interpretation is the lifeblood of spoken word- the very reason so little of it is, indeed, POETRY! Now, I’ve no oscilloscope nor EKG monitor to prove that, but do you REALLY need such manifestness proved? Speaking of which- ‘poetry’ is oft not recognized, or denied such, by a plenum of ax-grinders- even if we use the basest form of the word- i.e.- ‘verse’: Poetry is not the King James Bible, nor Walt Whitman, nor the Gettysburg Address, nor many other famed speeches, nor Mother Goose, nor Banjo Paterson, nor Robert Service, nor John Cage, Charles Olson, [fill in the heretical demonoid of your choosing], etc. Poetry is___________. The thing wrong with such declarations is not that the thing noted is not poetry- but may just be bad poetry- regardless of its formality or lack. In looking at some of the websites of some of the poets recommended to me by poet Harvey Stanbrough I can say without doubt that most of the poetry is bad- yet bad in much the same way as free verse doggerel is bad. Similarly, great poems- free or formed- have more in common with each other than bad poems of either type. It’s the excellence- or ‘beauty’ [you rapscallious Romantic, you!]- of the words’ interactions that determine its success or not, not the mindset which launched the poem to poem! As for mnemonics- or ‘memorability’- I would say that the ‘music’ [a better term than meter- see my Jeffers essay, again] of the phrase is subordinate to the image, idea, or combination of both, that the phrase evokes. In simple terms: Rilke’s famed injunction [let’s sidestep translation & deal with the English version], ‘You must change your life.’’s power resides best in that phrasing; but ‘Your life, you must change.’, while a dropoff in mnemonic power, does not fall off the cliff like ‘Jews just strange for life.’ No? & poetry as a predictively powerful model of the world? Only if you can show me how you got rich through the stock market, or knew it was gonna rain last Tuesday when the weather geeks predicted sun, by intoning verse in to your skull. Do we really need a latter-day Nostradamus? On to the last 2 stanzas- I detest free verse- or prose- translations of formal poetry; but humans loving verse? As for poetry’s power- you veer into the realm of the discredited ‘Mozart effect’ I think. Coherent full brains? This is the tell-tale marker of the artist trying to rationalize the ‘unique’ import of his/her art over others! What ring of hell dost that cast thee into? Damn if a poem can just be fun, or enjoyable- No! It must have social import! It must be REVOLUTIONARY in 1 way or another! My, how we stray into the Post-Mod now! What was that ‘choose your enemies well’ deal? Oh, I forgot, it was just something Reznikoff or Olson, or 1 of them damn free versers said!]
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